Commander Signa finishes her examination on Trixie and she is not impressed about what she sees. However, her blind loyalty to her administrator compells her to take her anyways to their outpost. But as Trixie is being dragged away, Signa notices a distant figure observing them and she expects someone else is looking for the unicorn too.
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(No, it's not the Gman watching them. It's someone else.)
Originally, the first panel with Signa describing Trixie was longer and more insulting towards her, but I couldn't fit it all in. In the last few panels, Signa would hint that she knows the distant figure watching them, but I changed the text when I wasn't able to show it without making it either bland or confusing. The last panel however stayed the same so I can make a location transition from the coast to their outpost without having to spend a page, showing the APC merely driving to their outpost with hardly any dialogue. Panel eight links this story to the other comic series I'm also working on and it hints that Eli Vance from chapter one sent someone into the outlands to look for Trixie after he returned from Equestria.
Besides all that, that's it for for now, until my other comic catches up to remain in sync with the story. I said so in one of my journals, that this was the plan for making chapter two of TCOT. Two comics showing different points of views in the same story... Eh... I've had worse ideas than this, so let's see if I'm going to f**k this up or not.
I got ten bucks saying I might, but let's see...